week 6

1. I read the introduction to the classical argument blog post.

2. I checked out the new 'hidden text' thing I'm doing

- It's some funny haha

3. I read the following information about the introduction of my classical argument.

4. First draft introduction.

At all times, we are exposed media such as TVs, radios, Internet, smartphones and newspapers. We sometimes ignore the important part of those. Exactly advertisements.

We see it in everywhere, even walking the street. Ad is defined as a form of marketing communication used to encourage, persuade, or manipulate an audience (viewers, readers or listeners; sometimes a specific group) to take or continue to take some action. It is very short time and we think it is not important to decide buying the goods. Also, many people think the ad time is the enjoying time to model that appear the ad.

However, ad is very important thing in the business and company very consider it. And an advertising men always nervous if the ad is completely achieve. But, It is unnecessary concern. Because of my argument that advertising always achieves through moving human mind.

1. Attention Grabber
 - I attracted the audience by describing daily situation to them, everywhere they go and advertisement. Then I pointed out something people's stereotype about ad.

2. Explains the topic 
 - In attention grabber, I decided the definition of advertising.

3. My thesis
 - It's clear, I write  'advertising always achieves through moving human mind' in the last sentence of paragraph. It was too simple and nobody would dispute it.